Help a Girl Learn to Rp as a Girl

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AuthorMama_Crayon
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Status [M]
Tags help pmrp straight 

Below will be a detailed starter that features an oc I created for an original story. I have yet to find someone in real life who matches how I envision her. However must people who read stuff with her in it tell me that I made an awesome character. ;;;;

 

The click of heels had never brought about a feeling of dread in grown men before her. The tight dresses that showed off the proud S line of her body only made them linger near. Her mannerisms in this time period spoke of money. While her wild green eyes promised death to those who dared to tempt fate. She always met a different man at the club. Each one behaving much like her. Each one speaking a different language which she seemed to speak fluently. Each man showing her great respect as if afraid of her.

However the man she met tonight seemed different than the others. His eyes did not show fear of her. His words not laced with over politeness. Even as she threatened him, he merely asked her name to which she gave a very confused, "Xia...they call me Xia."

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orbitinsomnia 3 years ago
i can help you too, the starter seem perfect
_Lucienus_ 3 years ago
From what I know so far from what you've given right now, it's a very good starter, however, I think it depends on how you continue to write her. But then again, everyone's writing differs from others.
JiwoosGxnshot 3 years ago
That's perfectly fine. What's wrong with it?
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