HELP!!!!! URGENT FOR A FANFICTION!!!!!!!

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OKAY SO, I USED TO BE REALLY GOOD AT FIGHT SCENES, I MEAN I STILL AM, BUT I'M NOT SO GOOD AND SUPERNATURAL POWER FIGHTS ANYMORE. I'M WRITING A FANFICTION AND I'M DOING THE FIRST ACTION SCENE BETWEEN KIBUM (KEY) AND JONGIN (KAI). KEY'S POWER IS FIRE, WHICH IS THE COLOR BLACK, ALONG WITH THE SIDE POWER OF FLIGHT. KAI'S POWER IS TELEPORTATION WITH THE SIDE POWER OF ILLUSIONS AND I'M JUST LIKE- AJSFNASFNASFANFMS. ALL I HAVE IS "Taking in a deep breath, chest rising up, back arched, he blew the air out into a thick line of black flames that raced towards the man, feet away from him."

 

HELP ME PLEASE

I JUST NEED SOMEONE TO HELP ME THROUGH THE ROPES IN DOING THESE TYPES OF FIGHTS AND GIVING ME EXAMPLES

THAT'S ALL THAT I ASK FOR

YOU CAN DO THIS IN EITHER PM OR IN THE COMMENTS BELOW

PLEASE HELP ME

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xShockWave 9 years ago
Would have helped if I weren't a whole week late. /bricked.
Chocopa 10 years ago
Ok lemme look at this when I got time x.x xD<3
-goddess 10 years ago
Me.
Lemme at it
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