Mild Depression...

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AuthorMr_Invisible
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So I've been writing some stuff again and here I wrote lyrics to a song I have yet to finish :D

"Mild Depression"

Sitting in the corner
Listening to the rain
As raindrops fall, people call
Voicing out their pain
The wind seeps through the windows
Whispering in my ear
“You’ve got no chance to run away
Your worst nightmare is here

It’s a dark tomorrow; it seems it has no end.
All your pain and sorrow will never ever mend.
So stop and look, just look around you,
No one cares, oh, cares about you.
Let go of all those that you hold
Follow me to a Mild Depression.”

Waking up in darkness
I tried to find a light.
I fought my way out through these walls
With all my strength and might.
The bout goes on for ages,
Yet no one knows a thing.
They tell you “Stop, don’t think about it.”
“Just shh - forget about it.”

Loneliness and fear are
My only company
“You do not belong here.
You better stick with me.”
Years of isolation
were so mundane, it seemed.
Anxieties have followed me
Even in my dreams.

It’s a dark tomorrow for me, myself and I.
There’s nothing much to do but sit alone and cry.
Just look at me and tell me frankly.
What you see’s not ordinary.
Don’t say “It’s gonna be okay.”
You don’t know this “mild” depression.

(Bridge to be written)

There’s no dark tomorrow, I’ll conquer it with light
That I found around us, and with it, I will fight.
(Chorus to be continued)

I've written it as "Mild Depression" because of how most people address it and the song itself is actually a visual  (well, not really visual, more like my own but like it's vivid or something like that) interpretation of how it feels and the experience itself and how troublesome it is. I know it might not be perfect but I tried. I'd love comments by the way! Please do leave some here~Constructive criticism is welcomed!

 

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unrevealed 8 years ago
woow, its really good, girl, like 'woow' good!
i love it!
this 8 years ago
*double thumbs up*
I especially like the part at the end about finding light and fighting through it all. It makes the difference from a song about drowning in misery to one about overcoming it, which I think is very important. I'm looking forward to the finished product if you decide to share it.
S3xySince1995 8 years ago
WHERE IS THE LIKE BUTTON FOR THIS
S3xySince1995 8 years ago
DUDE
DUDE
DUDE
i freaking loved it that was so freaking beautiful
4everTOP 8 years ago
Wow ♡
Loved it totally
Growing-Pains 8 years ago
AMAZING WOW DUDE. IM IMPRESSED
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