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park jihoon's ♡ 6 years ago
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kim seolhyun 6 years ago
bleh
kim seolhyun 6 years ago
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kim seolhyun 6 years ago
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song mino [A] 6 years ago
i miss you yoongi.
song mino [A] 6 years ago
i miss you yoongi.
song mino [A] 6 years ago
i miss you yoongi.
song mino [A] 6 years ago
i miss you yoongi.
song mino [A] 6 years ago
i miss you yoongi.
song mino [A] 6 years ago
yoongi i miss you.
song mino [A] 6 years ago
yoongi i miss you.
song mino [A] 6 years ago
yoongi i miss you.
song mino [A] 6 years ago
yoongi i miss you.
song mino [A] 6 years ago
yoongi i miss you.
song mino [A] 6 years ago
yoongi i miss you.
song mino [A] 6 years ago
yoongi i miss you.
song mino [A] 6 years ago
yoongi i miss you.
song mino [A] 6 years ago
yoongi i miss you.
song mino [A] 6 years ago
yoongi i miss you.
song mino [A] 6 years ago
yoongi i miss you.
song mino [A] 6 years ago
yoongi i miss you.
song mino [A] 6 years ago
yoongi i miss you.
song mino [A] 6 years ago
yoongi i miss you.
park jihoon's ♡ 6 years ago
amaziNg two hours
park jihoon's ♡ 6 years ago
sleep
park jihoon's ♡ 6 years ago
Jughead is introduced as the president of the first gang Ali joins, although there is no writing that goes into great detailed about who or how he is as a person. We see that Ali did not benefit greatly from Jughead because in the end we understand that
park jihoon's ♡ 6 years ago
1. Although it starts off with a cliché "I will never forget the day" hook, Tariq Ali's experience is one out of the ordinary. Ali grabs your attention by using a life event unique to everyday life and builds it up by adding more detail to what happened to him on that day. As he vaguely describes the state he was in during this memory, his statement on how he believed that he "was going to die," is enough to further pull the reader into the story. Ali knows that with this, he will leave us, the readers itching to read on in order to find out what went on and how he managed to survive to tell his story.

2. As the short story is named "Mi Abuelita, My Grandma" we go into the story already assuming that his grandmother will be of importance throughout the whole thing. However when she is actually introduced in the story along with his auntie, Ali immediately dives into talking about his grandmother, about how much she had hurt as she was comforting him in the hospital. It is clear to us that she cares about him as her heart aches to just the thought of him in pain, but immediately after, we learn that this is merely a small fraction of what she has already been through in her years of living. Ali briefly writes about how his mother and father had met, the failed relationship of drugs and abuse that lead to his grandmother taking him in as her own. We learn more about her life, the hardships her children bring her from being involved in gangs and how they had influenced Ali himself into joining a gang by living with him. We come to realize how much his grandmother has given up and had to put up with; her children may do wrong but mothers love brings her to care more about them than ever, especially with all the danger they are put in. As the reader, with this knowledge we are meant to share the pain Ali's grandmother went through yet we are also supposed to feel some sort of gratification towards her.


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jung sooyeon 6 years ago
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jung sooyeon 6 years ago
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kim seolhyun 6 years ago
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hobiebrown 6 years ago
Let me in please
I forgot my pencil
hookah 6 years ago
Okay so, this is the hardest rp that I'm leaving, but I have decided to quit rpr and I have to do this lol
This is the rp that I dearly treasured, I loved everyone and it felt home like I have never felt before in a rp. Have in mind that I will keep you guys in my heart for the rest of my days and I truly miss all of you. Well, I don't know if this a farewell or if it's forever, I just know that here I found true people (others not so much lmao) and I'm forever pleased about that. Thank you for all the wonderful memories.
Chaerin/Heejung/Shony is finally leaving. Adios ♡
xicewolf 6 years ago
*blows kisses to Minononono and Jihoonie/JinHittheHwan/allyouroldmuses*
I'll miss you both dearly. Until we meet again ♥
DamnDaehyun 6 years ago
dae is leaving.
unrevealed 6 years ago
rap moniemoniemonie left, see you around fam
ruotianz 6 years ago
Jongdae's leaving-
difficultcheese 6 years ago
Dahye is bouncing. Thank you for having me
dubuwu 6 years ago
yeri or doyeon?
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1069516efe8cb1773899 6 years ago
lai guanlin's ♡ [A] 7 minutes ago Reply
if rpr wants to see panwink and vkook they should join here
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